I'm going to assume that's supposed to be F Holland S English A Bur - Bel? There isn't any other German fleet. Not to be a hardass, but again, for future reference, not specifying exactly or specifying wrong = illegal move, hold order assigned. There are situations where illegal orders are intentionally submitted, especially when supporting allies, so it's not always clear. And the nature of the game makes "fixing" orders after they're seen impossible (if someone really WANTED the move to fail but wants to claim to their ally it was a mistake, what are they supposed to say when given an opportunity to 'fix' it?)
While we're nitpicking, this is a lot more minor, but F Aegean - Bulgaria should TECHNICALLY specify Bulgaria (south coast). It's the only legal option though, so no big deal. It'd only really matter with Spain. (Coasts are also shenanigans.)
Also, there's a retreats phase which happens immediately, so retreats are needed from England & Austria for F Eng & A Vie. You can't retreat to spaces that were just attacked from, have another army there, or there was a bounce in this turn. EDIT: So actually I think Vienna is annihilated? Don't see any valid retreats for it.
Anyway, w/ annotations assuming the German order is processed as F Hol:
Snowfire - France
F Brest - English Channel
F Middle Atlantic Ocean S F Brest - English Channel
A Spain - Gascony
A Ruhr - Belgium (*bounce* 2:2)
A Picardy S A Ruhr - Belgium
Sir Alex - Russia
F Sweden -> Norway (*bounce* 1:1)
A Warsaw SUPPORT A Galicia Hold
A Bohemia -> Vienna
A Galicia SUPPORT A Bohemia -> Vienna
A Rumania -> Budapest (*bounce*, 1:1)
F Black Sea SUPPORT A Rumania Hold (*invalid*)
Carthrat - England
Fleet Norway Move St. Petersburg [assumed nc]
Fleet North Sea Move Norway (*bounce* 1:1)
Army Burgundy Move Belgium (*bounce* 2:2)
Fleet Eng. Channel Hold (*dislodged*)
Army Yorkshire Hold
AndrewRogue - Turkey
F Smyrna-Aegean Sea
F Constantinople Support (F Smyrna-Aegean Sea)
A Bulgaria-Greece
A Ankara Hold
Excal - Austria-Hungary
Army Vienna Support Army Budapest (*dislodged*, 1:2, annihilated)
Army Budapest Support Army Vienna (*support cut*)
Army Serbia Move Rumania (*bounce* 1:1)
Navy Albania Move Triest
Navy Aegean Move Bulgaria [Assumed sc]
Magetastica - Germany
F supports A Bur->Bel [Assumed F Hol S A Bur->Bel]
A Ber->Kiel
A Mun->Tyr
A Sil->Mun
A Den (H, no orders received)